7 Responses to “The Taking Of Ariel”

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  1. cathy

    took me ten reads to get this far!!!……I can’t go on! x

  2. Anon

    Great story..!!

  3. Thanks ladies, I’m working on more :) I’m glad Aeodar is going over well so far.

  4. Aila

    Great writing, keeps me wanting more~

  5. Wow! Six pages later and here I am. XD

    Love the reluctance of the master. Great writer. :)

  6. This is the first published story of Aeodar, the world I created for The Price of Mercy. I’m most interested to hear any feedback :)

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